Sunday, October 18, 2009

Shack Shack Tree Mishap

(Sexain in para-rhyme)
















As my thoughts rest on him this fall,
There in my heart with joy they fill;
While autumn leaves on the ground fell.
Sitting underneath the shack-shack
Tree, sad feelings left me in shock;
Biting ants move away the shuck.

With great haste I rolled on the grass;
Into some smelly pile of crap,
Cow down, in hair, totally gross.
Reached for the shears to have hair crop;
Ball eagle lands on top my head,
And hitched me up with riding hood.

©Paterika Hengreaves
October 17, 2009/Maycocks, Barbados

1 comment:

  1. Dear Paterika

    It's a long time since I visited as I have spent the last 23 days dealing with this horrendous earthquake in Indonesia. Now I have a little time to visit friends, have a cup of tea, and feed my soul.

    Your poem somehow reminds me of the Maori proverb

    "Kua hinga te totara nui i te wao nui o Tane
    Moe mai te rangatira"

    The mighty totara has fallen in Tane's forest. May you rest peacefully now o mighty leader

    I hope your tall tree is at peace.

    Ka kite ano friend.

    Bob

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